Poem A traitors whim

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  1. Dyraele

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    A thousand strong, yet more indeed
    To grow in strength, face destiny
    The heart of the fold they will embrace
    Or be lost within, no sign nor trace

    The power grows, the fold rebels
    From whence it came we cannot tell
    A little bold, a show of force
    They show their hand and stay the course

    Time marches on, the force is dealt
    The weary struggle is soon felt
    Peace is wanted, not constant strife
    To give meaning to order, not end a life

    Then one came, he stood alone
    The wait was short, he brought them home
    Ones like him, a loyal breed
    To do the task, perform the deed

    He came in secret and many were lost
    The fold was opened, but at what cost
    His serpent tongue they could not resist
    They lay waste with mighty fists

    The tide did turn, the traitor shown
    The corner yields and hope has grown
    Nowhere to go he cannot hide
    Surrounded, shackled, he will abide

    But what is this, he does awaken
    He won't be caught, he won't be taken
    We lost the traitor, he did his deed
    The search is on for this mighty steed
  2. Kurik

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    Very cool Dyraele, reading this reminded me of the two bard songs for each faction in Skyrim.



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    Thanks Kurik, those songs were awesome.
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    Thanks for the poem! I love things like this, it makes the stories behind them feel more real, kind of like how it does in Tolkien's works.
  5. Dyraele

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    Wow, I feel so honored. Look what Carbine did with my poem! I don't know what to say. They did an awesome job on it.

    My poem set to music
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    Fantastic, just tweeted it to get the word out. Congratulations Dyraele, should up the interest in Wildstar :sneaky:
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    Freakin' cool! Hope to hear this song/poem in the game! Woot, grats Dyraele! You did great!
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    Nice! I agree with Black Wolf :)
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    This is really awesome!! Great poem Dyr and boy you gotta love Carbine ^^ the song is awesome.:up:
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    Awesome, this will quickly go into my playlist.
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    Oh my God this is amazing. Gratz Dyraele you deserve it.

    Carbine is quickly becoming one of my favorite companies, never have I seen community interaction at this level.
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    Official Post!

    http://www.wildstar-online.com/en/blog/a_day_of_thanks.php

    Looks like your poem became a thank you from Carbine ;) That has to be one of the most amazing things I've seen a company for their fans so far.

    Congratulations Dyraele! You wrote a beautiful poem, and I'm so happy you're receiving such wonderful recognition. Great job!

    Btw, Carbine... I know you probably wanted to take it slow and all... but I think I'm kinda falling in love with you. Please don't be scared, and try to get out of this relationship by ruining it like those other MMO companies did! I'm ready to commit... I hope you are too.

    Psst... call me ;D
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    Awesome Dyraele, well done and congrats buddy.............tell me they are going to send you a Baseball cap, ....right ? LOL
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    Very Cool Dyraele, Congratz Sir!
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    going to necro this as I just noticed they made the song from your poem.

    just wanted to say wow*2
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